What makes a character unforgettable? Why is it some live on
in our hearts long after we finish the book? The answer is depth; characters
that are concrete, vivid, with
easily identifiable character traits.
That's
all well and good, but how do we make
them that way? I'm glad you asked.
Psychology 101 – Lies
From
the study of psychology, we learn that most people have a Lie they believe
about themselves. These Lies are embedded before the age of 5. A child that
young doesn't reason the lie away, they simply believe it. It could come about
from a careless remark by a frustrated mother who asks, "Can't you do
anything right?" to outright abandonment or abuse. Whatever the cause, the
Lie colors the child's view of self and their motivation rises out of the Lie.
So how does that translate to
fiction?
The Lie
the characters believe is the key to
their motivation. Motivation is the key
to great characters and plots. Yes, you read that right - because you can plot
via character motivation.
Motivation
engages us; we can relate to the character's motivation. Readers will follow
characters through anything they do or any way they act if the motivation is strong enough. Based on a Lie, the motivation
will be strong and believable.
There are the 8 basic Lies:
To each
of the basic lies, there are shades and symptoms.
1. I'm a disappointment.
2. Not good enough (this is a very strong lie, often used
for men and strong female leads)
3. I'm not enough – or defective
4. I'm too much to handle and will get rejected
5. It's all my fault
6. Helpless – powerless to fix (this leads to a fear of
3. I'm not enough – or defective
4. I'm too much to handle and will get rejected
5. It's all my fault
6. Helpless – powerless to fix (this leads to a fear of
being controlled)
7. Unwanted/unloved
8. I'm bad (which could possibly be used as a symptom
7. Unwanted/unloved
8. I'm bad (which could possibly be used as a symptom
or excuse for another lie)
Your
characters will either fall victim to their lie or they will try to combat the
lie, proving it wrong. While a person could have more than one Lie, for
fictional characters, it's best to stick with one. Otherwise you dilute the
power and focus of their motivation.
Playing Journalist
The first
thing to do is interview your character. Play journalist, asking tough
questions. You might discover their Lie during the interview. Next, write a
free flowing backstory. Pantsters rock at this. Go as far back as you have to,
even to prior generations, until you discover what happened to cause your
character to believe a Lie and which one. Remember, we're all the product of
our ancestors' worldview. We either adopt it, reject it, or tweak it to be our
own.
For one
manuscript I'm working on, I had to go back 4 generations to discover where my
character's ancestors' worldview began. Through that
great-great-great-grandmother, I found the foundation for her mother's
worldview and thus, my character's Lie.
Word of
caution: 95 percent or more of the backstory will never make the pages of your
novel. It's what helps you to fully understand your character and what makes
him or her tick.
Once
you know the Lie, you can see how it would color his or her motivation,
determine their reaction to events, and how they would make decisions.
In my
debut novel, Chapel Springs Revival,
Claire charges into situations without thinking, because deep within her, she
wants to be a hero—superwoman come to save the day. And gain respect. Her lie
is it’s all her fault. Yet, with all
the crazy things that happen, I never have her consciously think it’s her fault. But she believes her antagonist thinks that.
She believes her husband thinks it, too. That's how I get her Lie across
without ever mentioning Lies.
Chapel Springs Revival
Everybody in the small
town of Chapel Springs, Georgia, knows best friends Claire and Patsy. It's
impossible not to, what with Claire's zany antics and Patsy's self-appointed
mission to keep her friend out of trouble. And trouble abounds. Chapel Springs has
grown dilapidated and the tourist trade has slackened. With their livelihoods
threatened, they join forces to revitalize the town. No one could have guessed
the real issue needing restoration is their marriages.
With their personal
lives in as much disarray as the town, Claire and Patsy embark on a mission of
mishaps and miscommunication, determined to restore warmth to Chapel Springs
—and their lives. That is if they can convince their husbands and the town
council, led by two curmudgeons who would prefer to see Chapel Springs left in
the fifties and closed to traffic.
While a large, floppy straw hat is her favorite, bestselling
novelist ANE MULLIGAN has worn many: hairdresser, legislative affairs director
(that's a fancy name for a lobbyist), drama director, playwright, humor
columnist, and novelist. Her lifetime experience provides a plethora of fodder
for her Southern-fried fiction. She firmly believes coffee and chocolate are
two of the four major food groups. President of the award-winning literary
site, Novel Rocket, Ane resides in Suwanee, GA, with her artist husband, her
chef son, and two dogs of Biblical proportion. You can find Ane on her Southern-fried Fiction website, Google+, Facebook, Goodreads, Twitter, and Pinterest.
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ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting Write Right, Ane. Great, informative post!
ReplyDeleteThanks for having me, Delia. I love to share what I've learned.
DeleteThank you for having me, Delia. It's a subject I'm passionate about.
DeleteLOL - Now they're both up, Ane. I apologize...my internet is spotty where I'm staying right now, and I don't get the comments approved as quickly as I'd like.
DeleteEnjoyed reading Ane's coments I loved her book Chapel Springs Revival
ReplyDeleteThanks, Ann! I left a comment yesterday but I don't see it. Maybe it wasn't profound. LOL
DeleteWhen I got a reminder about this post by one of my favorite writer friends (Ane) on the blog of another favorite writer friend (Delia), I knew this was one I had to check out even tho I am only 80 % done with my story due April 1st! I am so glad I did because I was having trouble with my character and this reminded me to go back to her lie to get into her character more! Thanks again, Ane! and Delia! Ane, I also ordered your book a couple weeks ago and really enjoy what I have read so far. Hope to finish it after April 1st--just realized my deadline is April Fool's Day. Wonder what that means!?
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the article and will purchase the book.
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